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May 18, 2012 / 0 Comments

The Paradox- The Hospital round

I was escorted into a dimly lit room. People in the room started leaving. I was injured badly. My head was spinning. I could see two of everything. I told myself to focus and I started looking for clues. My surroundings hinted that I was in a hospital.

There was an operating table beside me. Now I understood where the dim light was coming from. I was in an operating room. Those doctors were going to operate on me. A nurse came in. I recognized her on the first look.  She was the same bitch that put me back in here. Read more

May 17, 2012 / 0 Comments

Paradox – The first level

I have to do this all over again. I thought it was going to be as simple as before but somewhere inside me I knew that the boss may have changed the rules and game play. When the boss had flipped his fingers I was standing in front of the empire state building.

I kept on walking as I did last time. There was an unattended phone booth. It was ringing. It was possible that it was for me. I went there and picked it up. As soon as I did that a countdown began. I had 10 seconds to do something but what?

The 10 seconds flew off in no time and the screen of the phone booth read, ‘You made the wrong choice kiddo.’ Suddenly my eye caught a glimpse of a fire starting near the booth and the booth was vibrating. Before I could move my legs, the phone booth blew off into pieces with me in it. I still remember the excruciating pain.

Now I was on level 1. The game had begun. If I made the right choice in the beginning I would’ve won the game before it even began. I could see vague shapes carrying me and a light coming and going again and again. Where was I?

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May 16, 2012 / 0 Comments

Paradox – It begins

I woke up in a park. No one was around me and I had no recollection of how I got here. Who left me here? This is unbelievable. The last thing I know is walking into the toilet. I have my night suit on me. Thank god I have my watch on. The time is 2200 hours and what the hell? I’m sure it was 10th Jan the last I checked.

But now I could see 13th Jan what happened in the last three days? I have to find out where I am. Finally I could see a vague shape. It was coming right towards me. It was her, the girl responsible for all this. She came near me and sat beside me on the bench where I woke up. I asked, “Where am I?”

“You are safe.”

“Answer my question.”

“No time for that sweetheart. Come with me if you want to live.”

I knew she was not kidding so I followed her. She took me to a big building in front of the park. The building looked familiar. It was my late father’s late company but I also knew it was not real. Every time I met her I saw all kinds of places but in reality I did not go anywhere.

The Twist

She took me into my father’s office. It was just as I had remembered except that there was someone else sitting in my father’s place. His face was not visible. It was dark. The girl vanished into thin air. “You made the wrong choice kiddo. You need to get back in now.”

I knew he was not kidding. I was shocked and angry. This was actually happening and I hated that place. I was like noooooo not that thing again. But the boss did not listen and with a flick of his fingers I was back in the “PARADOX“…

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May 15, 2012 / 1 Comment

Paradox- The Choice

For those who don’t know who I am, I am a seventeen year old teenager who is about 5 feet 11 inches tall and has a crooked hairstyle. No one likes me the way I am. I have to pretend to be someone else in front of everyone individually. To a person walking by I am an idiot teen lost in his own world, to my darling mother I’m her cutie pie still, my sister takes me as a toy, my teachers call me Einstein but in reality I’m just an ordinary teenager living his life.

Correction… I was an ordinary teenager until the choice. Now some of you might have the question…. What choice? You’ll come to know further. And by the way my name is Eden Hex.

So as I was saying I was just an ordinary teenager but then I had to make the choice. Now I had a big house on the beach with hundreds of girls and I partied all night. I was the happiest person in the whole world until the unthinkable happened… I had to make the choice again and I got greedy this time and made the wrong choice and here I am all messed up on the 127th floor of Burj Khalifa, the tallest building in the world making the choice of my life again…

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May 14, 2012 / 0 Comments

Paradox- The Synopsis

Paradox is, as the name suggest, one of the most tricky and confusing stories I have written. The best part about these paradox stories, is that they are a page turner. Now as this story is supposed to baffle and confuse you, I am not going to give any further information in this synopsis.

All I am going to say is this, “Welcome to the Paradox, A Game where everything is tested.” At the end of the game, you get something which you have dreamt of your entire life. This story is of the narrative type, i.e. the protagonist of the story tells his own story due to which the story becomes more juicy and interesting.

Moral of the Story

After reading the story many of you would think. The main thought in your mind would be, “Would I have done this?” The purpose of this story is to bring to light who people waste their second chances. Moral of the story is that there is no easy path to success. Everything happens in due time. Do not bite more than you can chew. Stay focused on your goal and never give up and never surrender.

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